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PostSubject: Second art topic.   Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:20 pm

Well, this has already been posted on BZpower, but ill post it here too.
I consider this my best piece of art, and I want to share it with you guys.
Here ya go.

If you had not guessed, it is the Energized Protodermis Entity.
I drew this about 4-5 months ago.
I hope you like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:54 am

I like the torso and head... but it's a little too blue for energized protodermis, and it has inconsistent hands.



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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Mon Feb 23, 2009 11:19 am

Nice! It does look a little blue... but then, my EP Entity in the old banner looked kinda blue, too...

I like the head. Overall it reminds me of a water elemental from Ultima Online. Razz

Good work!

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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:16 pm

Bravo...

The only things I'm a bit uncomfortable with are the arms ( And LEGS! Wink ) of the EPE. The arms look to thin, and lanky, while the hands are in an awkward pose. However, I like it. GETSA 10/11!

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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:58 pm

I guess I have to be the SC (Simon Cowell) of this forum then.

I'm sorry, but I really think you could make it better. It's too thin for my taste (of course, that could have been your intention?) and the arms are too long - it's left hand is missing and the EP flying around looks weird. You might want to make a tale on them, to make it look like it is shot from the EP entity.
Also, its "legs," or whatever it's called, should have, like, faded more into the lake if you know what I mean?

But I love the head and background!

Sorry for being so pessimistic,
Komé.

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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:23 pm

Komé the Artist wrote:
I guess I have to be the SC (Simon Cowell) of this forum then.

I'm sorry, but I really think you could make it better. It's too thin for my taste (of course, that could have been your intention?) and the arms are too long - it's left hand is missing and the EP flying around looks weird. You might want to make a tale on them, to make it look like it is shot from the EP entity.
Also, its "legs," or whatever it's called, should have, like, faded more into the lake if you know what I mean?

But I love the head and background!

Sorry for being so pessimistic,
Komé.


Yes.... well, maybe if some little splashes were coming from it, it would be O.K.. Ad there should be faint leg detail, because after all, even it must walk around.



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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:28 pm

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Komé the Artist wrote:
I guess I have to be the SC (Simon Cowell) of this forum then.

I'm sorry, but I really think you could make it better. It's too thin for my taste (of course, that could have been your intention?) and the arms are too long - it's left hand is missing and the EP flying around looks weird. You might want to make a tale on them, to make it look like it is shot from the EP entity.
Also, its "legs," or whatever it's called, should have, like, faded more into the lake if you know what I mean?

But I love the head and background!

Sorry for being so pessimistic,
Komé.


Yes.... well, maybe if some little splashes were coming from it, it would be O.K.. Ad there should be faint leg detail, because after all, even it must walk around.



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I was more thinking that it should fade more into the liquid beneath it, as the EP entity never walks as far as anyone knows.

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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:30 pm

easily my favourite by you. all the flaws have been pointed out, so, KUTGW

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PostSubject: Re: Second art topic.   Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:44 pm

Komé the Artist wrote:

I was more thinking that it should fade more into the liquid beneath it, as the EP entity never walks as far as anyone knows.

Meh, well you still have a good point. Speaking of Mr. EPE, maybe he was related to Mr. Fire entity. That would be interesting to draw.



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